loud house save the date rewrite fanfiction
Clyde, I need your help. Lincoln:(also giggles) Yeah, Yeah! . The other Louds: April fools! They're not getting married! ), Lori: YOU MONSTER! (Clyde just ignores him again and walks off, to his annoyance.) Making the Grade (my version) Special thanks to BigFanofEntertainment and Jokeman20 for story assistance. You gotta get me out of here! Lucy: I don't care about being grounded. He couldn't do much however, because by the time Lincoln's head finally corrected, he found himself kissing Ronnie Anne. Lori: Well, you did worser things to her! Lori: Bobby told me(starts to cry) RIGHT BEFORE HE BROKE UP WITH ME!! Lincoln: It's okay, you guys go, I'll handle this myself. THEN NO, WE'RE JUST FRIENDS! (looks up to the ceiling lamp and finds a clue) Aha! Nathy and Flaky. Lincoln: (turns around) Unless it was one of you two! I thought this was just a one-time thing, but because she's been doing this for a while, I'm being bullied not just by her, but by my classmates. (crashes into the van and gets catapulted into the tree in the front yard). Lana: Wish I could take the credit. I would have been here sooner, but I was thwarted by this dastardly piece of paper that flew from your bathroom window. Don't worry, someday, you'll be too. Lynn Sr.: Oh! (chuckles), Lincoln: "Lori(hugs her) Thanks for understanding. I really dont. Lincoln:[reading the note] Happy Sloppy Joe Tuesday, Lame-o. Big Bertha's got something! This time, this is a Loud House rewrite of one of the most divisive (and mean spirited) Loud House episodes ever made: "Sleuth or Consequences" from Season 1 of "The Loud House." All credit for this reposted rewrite goes to realyoshiplayer since this fanfic was mainly from him. By. (Ronnie-Anne chuckles and then puts her arm around him while lifting out her other arm as if she's taking a selfie right now as he imitates Lori again.) Whatcha doing at Jean Juan's French-Mex Buffet? I really do feel awful for what I did in the past, and now I understand why he insulted me. (Luna rubs Lincoln's forehead, then she and Leni go downstairs. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. (laughs during rimshot), (Flashbacks begin of Lincoln clogging the toilet; Flashback #1: Lincoln is scraping his gross dinner into the toilet), Lincoln: So long, liverwurst loaf! "So?" Hermione starts packing her books away. Sid: So, how did you guys went to Jean Juan's French-Mex Buffet? Luna: Plus, I'm sick of seeing everyone blame you for something I know you didn't do. Ronnie-Anne: It's okay. Lori: Bobby told me(starts to cry) RIGHT BEFORE HE BROKE UP WITH ME!! And when there is AND ALSO I CAN'T THIS ANYMORE! (We see black screen, then a title shows up.) Classmate #3: When's the wedding day, Lincoln? Two flat water(gives the third one to Lori.) (Lori chases after Lincoln, who hides behind the chair; he trips, and Lori catches him and holds him up by his shirt.). CartoonsLoud House Follow/FavSave The Date (Alternate Ending) By:BladeSword91 Not wanting to hold his anger any longer, Lincoln finally snaps at Ronnie Anne for the things she did in "Heavy Meddle" including punching him in the eye. ", Lincoln: "Let me finish! Lori: Lincoln! ?, Lincoln: Yeah, and how about all the selfies? ", Lori: "I should have told you earlieractually I should have told all of you WAY sooner, but Ronnie Anne is Bobby's sister. (Sometime later, Lori, Lynn, Lola, and Lisa arrive home). (goes to the bathroom), (Lincoln goes to the bathroom, but when he opens the door, water from the toilet gushes out). I mean, friends. (Starts with Lincoln at school sitting with his friends at the lunch table trying to get something out of his pants. (It's been two days after Two Boys and a Baby, as Lincoln is covered in red spots as he's exposed to chicken pox, while Lily made a full recovery, they're in Aunt Ruth's car, as she drives them home) AUNT RUTH: Okay, Lincoln and Lily, here's your place. (ducks into a nearby closet). It's so sickeningly sweet I get a toothache just looking at it! Lori: Man, what happened today with Lincoln was literally hilarious! Lincoln: I'm just here with my family. As Bobby puts Lori down, a waiter slips on the mints and crashes offscreen, sendinf a mask rolling away from where he crashed.). Lincoln: Don't get me wrong, I do like you, but these two lovebirds are constantly saying that they're gonna get married when they're older and when they do, you're gonna be my sister, and dating you would be.you know Ronnie Anne: Wait, that's not true! Clyde: If I may(lifts the cover so that he slams it in Bobby's face.) Villains better watch their back. Manage all your favorite fandoms in one place! Lana: You guys do remember that was just down the toilet, right? Why, of all the tables, did you request to sit here? Kicking Lincoln out of the house has led the 10 female Loud siblings to fall into the clutches of Lord Tetherby's greedy ambitions, subjecting them to cruel experimentation. (enters the bathroom with her father and Big Bertha) Big Bertha coming through! Bobby approaches their table.). ), Lincoln: Just, uh, dropped my fork. He clogged the toilet with a Princess Pony book! I forgive you. Also featuring Right this way. (As they share a laugh over this, the camera zooms over to their older siblings watching from the buffet. Very funny, guys. Classmates: Ronnie and Lincoln sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G. [they start laughing again] Lincoln: Guys, Ronnie Anne is NOT my girlfriend. Clyde: Well I see you still angry atLori (sighs then angry growl) Bobby! Loud House - Don't Save The Date Published: Jun 14, 2018. I knew we would be able to fix it! Lincoln: I'll go iron my khakis! Ow! (They open the door, but then a bucket of toilet water falls on top of them), (They notice Lincoln, Leni, Luna, Luan, Lucy, and Lana in front of them). (wheels the cart up to their table. Wait! (His attempt at small talk does not appear to have done him any good;Ronnie-Anne is still scowling at him.). Wait! The Loud House (Rewrite) Chapter 1: "Welcome to the Loud House" First, it showed Lincoln outside at the front porch. Let Lynn-sanity handle this. Let bygones be bygones.. Lincoln: (looks at paper and sees something familiar) This looks like a page from Princess Pony. Bobby: Ronnie Anne, is all of what Lincoln said true? Click, click, click! Don't lie to me! I'LL tell Dad! Lincoln: Uh, bathroom. Lincoln: (low voice) Well, I believe so, because every day, they talk about their love and how they are gonna get married soon, and it's not gonna be long, so there is no point in even trying. What is it? AND GOODBYE!! I mean, "show your work?" (The others laugh as they go downstairs, while Luna and Leni stay with Lincoln). Got all the waterworks as you would put it. Lori thought about telling them what happened, but she didn't want to, first off, ruin the moment and, second off, get Lincoln more pressured. Clyde: I just wanna that i'm sorry for messing up once again. Lana: (comes up to Lincoln) Lincoln, I'm really sorry I was being mean to you. ", (Clyde points at Ronnie Anne. Realizing her mistake..Lori has to gain forgiveness, but the only question left is..How? ), Lincoln: NO! I mean it is still April fool's day. Lucy: What about Lily? He starts to shout. Hello, Dr. Lopez? Contents 1 Plot 2 Synopsis 3 Cast 4 Music 5 Physical distribution 6 Trivia 7 International edits 8 References 9 Errors 10 Video 11 Sources Plot Bobby and Lori go on a double date with Lincoln and Bobby's little sister, Ronnie Anne . Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. Where's Lori. Ronnie Anne: Sup, Linc! Youre talking to a Fish Brawlers collector., Lincoln: (happily gasp) I like those games too!, Ronnie Anne: Did we just become best friends? This calls for musica! Luna: (calls downstairs) Alright! They'd make fun of me for the rest of my life. (Lincoln and his five sisters laugh, while the other four look annoyed). ", Lori (hugs him back): " You're welcome. Then, Leni and Luna came in). And when I heard someone coming, I panicked. Lori and Bobby are having the time of their lives while Lincoln and Ronnie Anne havent said a word after an awkward Hello. From and to each other. The end result? Bobby: I mean, whatever. After what happened, I wouldnt blame her if shes still upset with me., Lori: Lincoln, this could be the only chance that you and Ronnie Anne might make up., Lori: Thank you, Lincoln. I just, really need to get to that convention. Rate Animation Adventure Comedy Lincoln has his hands full when all ten of his sisters ask him to cover for them at the same time./Lincoln and Lori go on a double date with Bobby and his little sister, Ronnie Anne. - Aunt . The main problem I had was that I wanted to keep the story as it was requested. Luna: Yeah, he's only tryin' to go to a convention with Clyde. Luan: (suspisious) What are you so happy about? SO I'M LEAVING!! (Clyde can only watch forlornly as his unrequited crush and his rival walk off to the buffet, so he vents his frustrations by punching the nacho down on the plate he's holding and storms off. Why does Bobby care? Lincoln: But I have to find out before I miss the convention! You're wearing date pants! Ronnie Anne: What do you mean, "I win"? Lincoln: It's okay Luan, I'm sure I won't stay mad about this for very long. I gotta escargo! (he dashes for the men's room and locks himself in.) It's bad luck! (Lincoln points to the laughing calssmates at their table.). Classmate #4: Hey Lincoln. Am I right? I didn't know she was here. ), Lincoln: NO! A man of few words, and fewer emotions. Lisa: Oh, please! Classmate #3: I knew it! I might not like it so much, but I'm quite comfortable with who I am, obviously. We're running out of time and we've got nothing! Lincoln: Cry? (laughs during rimshot). Could you tell us! I want you to leave me alone! Bright lights, colors all . Again, I'm sorry for breaking up with you, because I didn't know Ronnie Anne would actually harm your little bro. Up in his bedroom, Lincoln gives Clyde a call on his walkie-talkie.) (pulls out a deck of cards that spill all over the floor) Dang it. Guys, I already told you. (But just as Clyde steps back onto the phone book he was standing on, he knocks the counter over and spills the bowl os mints, startling Lincoln and making Lori jump into Bobby's arms. 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